Aurora- This looks soo cool! It was hard to see in class (maybe because it was hard to flip the pages? I don't know) but putting it in a sequence like this- it looks really good. Any reason why you chose not to continue in color? It would be interesting to see the rest in color because the beginning is so vibrant and awesome. -Pam
Thanks! The smell from the permanent markers had gotten to me by the time I had finished outlining. I'll finish it over time but this time a couple of pages at a time not being over ambitious & doing about 40 at a time. Yea it was hard to flip the pages (I had a hard time myself) That's why I decided to take Santiago's advice & make a video out of it. That way you could see the whole thing good.
Aurora, Awesome job with the animation! I agree with Pam, while it still looked cool in class it was a but hard to flip the pages, as were most of them. it looks really cool though once they are all evenly put together. The images of the soccer ball and then the arrow and heart are random, but I like random so it works for me!
WOW it looks better in the video! I love it. The colors everything, and it moves so nicely. Keep working with the little tear, I think you can make it do so many things. I dunno maybe make a character out of it. Yours was one of my favorites because it was color
I remember when I was looking through yours in class and I was blown away. It is so creative. The soccer ball bouncing and the arrow going through the heart are pretty much flawless. It looks awesome as a video too! I liked the simplicity and your color choices.
Aurora-
ReplyDeleteThis looks soo cool! It was hard to see in class (maybe because it was hard to flip the pages? I don't know) but putting it in a sequence like this- it looks really good. Any reason why you chose not to continue in color? It would be interesting to see the rest in color because the beginning is so vibrant and awesome.
-Pam
Thanks! The smell from the permanent markers had gotten to me by the time I had finished outlining. I'll finish it over time but this time a couple of pages at a time not being over ambitious & doing about 40 at a time.
ReplyDeleteYea it was hard to flip the pages (I had a hard time myself) That's why I decided to take Santiago's advice & make a video out of it. That way you could see the whole thing good.
Aurora,
ReplyDeleteAwesome job with the animation! I agree with Pam, while it still looked cool in class it was a but hard to flip the pages, as were most of them. it looks really cool though once they are all evenly put together. The images of the soccer ball and then the arrow and heart are random, but I like random so it works for me!
WOW it looks better in the video!
ReplyDeleteI love it. The colors everything, and it moves so nicely. Keep working with the little tear, I think you can make it do so many things. I dunno maybe make a character out of it. Yours was one of my favorites because it was color
I remember when I was looking through yours in class and I was blown away. It is so creative. The soccer ball bouncing and the arrow going through the heart are pretty much flawless. It looks awesome as a video too! I liked the simplicity and your color choices.
ReplyDeleteYours was so colorful and so interesting. It progressed well from page to page and actually looked animated.
ReplyDeleteIts one of the best flip book animations I have seen, very nice use of the sequence. It has a perfect follow up of the drawings. Very colorful. Great.
ReplyDeletegreat ideas and the sequence of events throughout your story was practically flawless... well done
ReplyDeleteI admit this was my favorite from the class. The lack of color throughout was not in the least a handicap. The animation was professional and smooth.
ReplyDeleteI agree, it was hard to see in class, but the video really helped me see the sequence a lot better. I love the water drops, they flow perfect!
ReplyDeletegreat color in the beginning, wish it would have continued!
ReplyDeletesmooth animations
very clean drawings
great concept
Great images, would have liked to have seen them colored.
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